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1. Earth with wings
    stillness fills the middle
    strongest of winds.

2. Golden eyes glow
    sighing winds through the grass
    envelope hunter.

3. White foam
    billowing clouds
    covers starlit sand.

4. Leaves' breath
    carried down the hill
    by sparrow's song.

5. Shadowed water
    ripples from fish tail
    dragonflies hum.
    
6. Rythmic voices
   floating on shadows
   muffled in the wind
   
©2008-2009 ~dragon-faerie
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for the 31 day haikuthon, which you can find at this [link] . I need to do two more... I got a little bit behind.

My first attempt at writing haiku!
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Haiku is just beyond me. I know what they are, and how to do them, but I never understand other people's Haiku.

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Your Flower Power is no match for my GLOWER POWER!
thankyou :)

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I laugh in the face of Death! ... Maybe not laugh...more like a quiet snicker. And I wouldn't do it directly in Death's face, so it's more like a quiet snicker behind Death's back.
day 3
the sky and the sea are so similar in colors and behavior. no wonder we are always confused with them both. :giggle:

day 4
i hear the song and smells the leaves. this is quite well done.

please update. i'll be back for more.

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